모든게 날아간 이후로 의욕도 날아갔습니다.
날도..더웠다..추웠다..해서..너무 졸리구...
학원도 졸업생들 작품 봤는데 취직 못할것 같아서 고민이 이래저래 많습니다
이 핑계로 오늘은 좀 쉬어가려고 합ㄴㅣ 다
아니? 뭔소리임 쉬지 않을것이다
쉬는건 죽어서도 쉴수있음
자 오늘도 가보자
🦖 지브러시
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또잉?
어라? 바보 생성됨 아무래도 걍 대충 씌워놓은거라 그렇습니다 하나도 손보지 않았어요 희희
아 머리 없으면 괜찮아요 아 진짜로
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내일 수정 함 하겠습니다 아 웃기당...ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
🦖오픽
Q : in your background survey, you indicated that you like to see movies. what kind of movies do you enjoy watching? why do you like to watch those kinds of movies? tell me about these
A : i like watching all kinds of movies, including romance, comedie, and thrillers. however, the type of film i enjoy most is action. the things about this flims that attracts me is that they are so highly suspenseful. in this movies genere are sometimes used in combination with other genres, such as marvel studio [avengers], they combined sf and superheros with action. and movie like the [loard of the rings] combine fantasy and action. this combination of action and other genres can make more prominent and interesting. ofcours, the traditional action genre like 007 and mission impossible series they make me nervous and make me feel human wonder. the action movies are fun to watch with friends. and also it becomes a study for my dreams. because action movies often feature advanced special effects and 3dmodeling, so they are fun and study for me.
✅ 원래 답변 평가 (IM2~IM3 수준)
🔴 주요 문제점
- 문법 오류
- "comedie" → "comedy" (철자 오류)
- "flims" → "films" (철자 오류)
- "the things about this flims that attracts me is" → "The thing that attracts me to these films is" (단수/복수 및 동사 형태 오류)
- "in this movies genere" → "In this movie genre" (단수/복수 오류)
- "they combined sf and superheros with action" → "They combine sci-fi and superheroes with action." (현재형 사용, 단어 수정)
- "this combination of action and other genres can make more prominent and interesting." → "This combination makes the story more engaging and dynamic." (문장 구조 오류 수정)
- 문장 구조 및 표현 오류
- "this movies genere are sometimes used in combination with other genres" → "This genre is often mixed with other genres." (더 자연스럽게 수정)
- "the [loard of the rings]" → "The Lord of the Rings" (영화 제목 철자 수정 및 올바른 표기)
- "they make me nervous and make me feel human wonder." → "They keep me on the edge of my seat and fill me with excitement." (자연스럽게 표현)
- 어색한 표현 및 유창성 부족
- 예제 영화에 대한 설명 부족
- 문장이 단순하고 반복적임
- 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋음
👉 예상 등급: IM3 수준 (의미 전달 가능하지만 문법적 오류와 표현 부족, 유창성이 아쉬움)
✅ AL 수준으로 수정한 답변 (개선된 문장)
🟢 수정된 답변 (AL 수준)
"I enjoy watching all kinds of movies, including romance, comedy, and thrillers. However, my favorite genre is action. What I love about action films is that they are full of excitement and suspense, keeping me on the edge of my seat.
One thing I find interesting about action movies is that they are often mixed with other genres. For example, The Avengers by Marvel Studios blends sci-fi and superhero elements with action, making it even more thrilling. Similarly, The Lord of the Rings combines fantasy and action, creating an epic adventure that is visually stunning.
Of course, I also enjoy traditional action movies like the James Bond and Mission: Impossible series. These films are packed with intense stunts and breathtaking chase scenes that always leave me amazed. Watching them makes me feel like I’m part of the action!
Another reason I love action movies is that they inspire me. Since I’m interested in 3D modeling and special effects, these films are not just entertaining but also educational for me. The cutting-edge CGI and visual effects in action movies give me ideas and motivation for my own work. Watching them is both fun and a great way to study the latest industry techniques."
✅ 개선된 부분 정리
| "comedie" | "comedy" | 철자 오류 수정 |
| "flims" | "films" | 철자 오류 수정 |
| "the things about this flims that attracts me is" | "What I love about action films is that they are full of excitement and suspense, keeping me on the edge of my seat." | 문장 구조 개선 및 자연스러운 표현 추가 |
| "in this movies genere are sometimes used in combination with other genres" | "One thing I find interesting about action movies is that they are often mixed with other genres." | 문법 오류 수정 및 자연스러운 표현으로 변경 |
| "such as marvel studio [avengers], they combined sf and superheros with action." | "For example, The Avengers by Marvel Studios blends sci-fi and superhero elements with action, making it even more thrilling." | 문장 자연스럽게 수정 |
| "movie like the [loard of the rings] combine fantasy and action." | "Similarly, The Lord of the Rings combines fantasy and action, creating an epic adventure that is visually stunning." | 영화 제목 수정 및 문장 자연스럽게 변경 |
| "this combination of action and other genres can make more prominent and interesting." | "This combination makes the story more engaging and dynamic." | 문장 구조 오류 수정 |
| "ofcours, the traditional action genre like 007 and mission impossible series they make me nervous and make me feel human wonder." | "Of course, I also enjoy traditional action movies like the James Bond and Mission: Impossible series. These films are packed with intense stunts and breathtaking chase scenes that always leave me amazed." | 문장 자연스럽게 수정 |
| "the action movies are fun to watch with friends." | (삭제 또는 더 구체적으로 설명) | 문장이 너무 짧고 단순하여 삭제 또는 확장 필요 |
| "because action movies often feature advanced special effects and 3dmodeling, so they are fun and study for me." | "Since I’m interested in 3D modeling and special effects, these films are not just entertaining but also educational for me." | 문장 자연스럽게 개선 |
✅ 오픽에서 자주 쓰이는 표현 (회화용)
- "What I love about action films is that they are full of excitement and suspense, keeping me on the edge of my seat."
- 내가 액션 영화를 좋아하는 이유는 흥미진진하고 긴장감 넘쳐서 계속 몰입하게 되기 때문이다.
- 감정을 강조하는 표현
- "One thing I find interesting about action movies is that they are often mixed with other genres."
- 내가 흥미롭게 생각하는 점은 액션 영화가 종종 다른 장르와 결합된다는 점이다.
- 영화의 특징을 설명할 때 유용함
- "For example, The Avengers by Marvel Studios blends sci-fi and superhero elements with action, making it even more thrilling."
- 예를 들어, 어벤져스는 SF와 슈퍼히어로 요소를 액션과 결합해 더욱 짜릿하게 만든다.
- 영화 예시를 자연스럽게 설명하는 표현
- "These films are packed with intense stunts and breathtaking chase scenes that always leave me amazed."
- 이 영화들은 강렬한 스턴트와 숨막히는 추격 장면들로 가득 차 있어서 늘 감탄하게 된다.
- 액션 영화의 특징을 강조하는 문장
- "Since I’m interested in 3D modeling and special effects, these films are not just entertaining but also educational for me."
- 나는 3D 모델링과 특수 효과에 관심이 있기 때문에, 이런 영화들은 단순히 재미있을 뿐만 아니라 공부가 되기도 한다.
- 자신의 관심 분야와 연결하는 표현
✅ 해석 (한글 번역)
"나는 로맨스, 코미디, 스릴러 등 다양한 영화를 보는 것을 좋아하지만, 가장 좋아하는 장르는 액션 영화예요. 액션 영화가 좋은 이유는 긴장감이 넘치고 흥미진진해서 몰입할 수 있기 때문이죠.
특히, 액션 영화는 종종 다른 장르와 결합되는 점이 흥미로워요. 예를 들어, 마블 스튜디오의 어벤져스는 SF와 슈퍼히어로 요소를 액션과 결합해 더욱 짜릿한 영화가 되었어요. 반지의 제왕은 판타지와 액션을 결합해 장대한 모험을 만들어냈고요.
전통적인 액션 영화도 좋아해요. 007 시리즈나 미션 임파서블 같은 영화는 강렬한 스턴트와 숨막히는 추격 장면이 가득해서 늘 감탄하게 돼요.
또한, 나는 3D 모델링과 특수 효과에 관심이 있어서, 이런 영화들은 나에게 단순히 재미있는 것뿐만 아니라 공부가 되기도 해요."
Q : please tell me about a memorable experience you have had in your neighborhood. when and where did it occur? what happende that made the experience so memorable? please describe it in detail.
A : an experience i had in my neighborhood way back i was 20. is one that i will never forget. that day im hangout with my friends. but they didnt answer my call. i was angery that setuation because i dont like broke an appointment on the same day. anyway i go to appointment place, i tried not to get angry. they was my best friends, and one of them has known me for more 10 years. so i trey my best. afther later, mu friends ran towards me with a sorry look. they close me, two of them made a kiln with their arms asked me to ride it. im so confused. that place has lot of people, everyone see us. im run away from them. im so embarraseed! then i fell down, my friends call my name and run for me. i felt like i was in a slapstick comedy as a result ill be relieved of anger, these day we talk about this story it was a great memory.
✅ 원래 답변 평가 (IM1~IM2 수준)
🔴 주요 문제점
- 문법 오류
- "way back i was 20." → "Way back when I was 20." (전치사 및 시제 오류)
- "that day im hangout" → "That day, I was hanging out" (시제 오류)
- "they didnt answer my call." → "They didn’t answer my calls." (복수형 활용)
- 문장 구조 및 표현 오류
- "i dont like broke an appointment" → "I don’t like it when someone breaks an appointment." (자연스럽게 수정)
- "they was my best friends" → "They were my best friends." (문법 오류)
- "these day we talk about this story it was a great memory." → "Even now, we still talk about this story, and it always makes us laugh." (더 자연스럽게)
- 어색한 표현 및 유창성 부족
- 감정을 표현하는 문장이 부족하고, 단순한 문장 나열이 많음
- 사건을 설명하는 흐름이 매끄럽지 않음
- 상황을 더 구체적으로 묘사할 필요가 있음
👉 예상 등급: IM2 수준 (의미 전달은 되지만 문법과 유창성 부족, 자연스럽지 않은 표현이 많음)
✅ AL 수준으로 수정한 답변 (개선된 문장)
📌 오픽에서 자주 쓰이는 표현도 함께 포함함!
🟢 수정된 답변 (AL 수준)
"One of the most unforgettable experiences in my neighborhood happened when I was 20. That day, I had plans to meet my best friends, but no one was answering my calls. At first, I was really annoyed because I hate it when people cancel plans at the last minute.
Still, I decided to go to the meeting place, trying to stay calm. When I arrived, I saw my friends running toward me with guilty looks on their faces. Suddenly, two of them locked their arms together and asked me to hop on, as if they were making a human chair for me. I was so confused!
The place was crowded, and people were staring at us. I felt so embarrassed that I tried to run away, but I tripped and fell. My friends shouted my name and rushed to help me up. At that moment, I felt like I was in a slapstick comedy!
In the end, my frustration disappeared, and we all burst into laughter. Even now, we still talk about that day, and every time we do, it brings back great memories and makes us laugh."
✅ 개선된 부분 정리
| "way back i was 20." | "One of the most unforgettable experiences in my neighborhood happened when I was 20." | 더 자연스럽게 문장 구조 수정 |
| "that day im hangout with my friends." | "That day, I had plans to meet my best friends, but no one was answering my calls." | 시제 오류 수정 & 자연스러운 표현 추가 |
| "i was angery that setuation" | "At first, I was really annoyed because I hate it when people cancel plans at the last minute." | 감정 표현을 더 세련되게 수정 |
| "anyway i go to appointment place" | "Still, I decided to go to the meeting place, trying to stay calm." | 더 자연스럽게 수정 |
| "they was my best friends" | "When I arrived, I saw my friends running toward me with guilty looks on their faces." | 문법 오류 수정 & 상황을 더 생동감 있게 설명 |
| "they close me, two of them made a kiln with their arms asked me to ride it." | "Suddenly, two of them locked their arms together and asked me to hop on, as if they were making a human chair for me." | 문장 구조 수정 & 더 자연스럽게 |
| "im so confused. that place has lot of people, everyone see us." | "I was so confused! The place was crowded, and people were staring at us." | 감정을 더 강조 & 문법 수정 |
| "im run away from them. im so embarraseed!" | "I felt so embarrassed that I tried to run away, but I tripped and fell." | 감정 표현을 더 자연스럽게 변경 |
| "then i fell down, my friends call my name and run for me." | "My friends shouted my name and rushed to help me up." | 더 생동감 있는 표현 추가 |
| "i felt like i was in a slapstick comedy." | "At that moment, I felt like I was in a slapstick comedy!" | 강조하는 느낌 추가 |
| "these day we talk about this story it was a great memory." | "Even now, we still talk about that day, and every time we do, it brings back great memories and makes us laugh." | 유창한 표현으로 수정 |
✅ 오픽에서 자주 쓰이는 표현 (회화용)
- "One of the most unforgettable experiences was when..."
- 가장 잊을 수 없는 경험 중 하나는 ~였다.
- 경험 묘사에서 자주 사용됨
- "I had plans to meet my friends, but no one was answering my calls."
- 친구들과 만나기로 했는데, 아무도 전화를 받지 않았다.
- 오픽에서 계획이 틀어지는 상황을 설명할 때 유용함
- "At first, I was really annoyed because..."
- 처음에는 정말 짜증이 났어요, 왜냐하면...
- 감정을 강조하는 표현
- "Still, I decided to go to the meeting place, trying to stay calm."
- 그래도 나는 침착하려고 하면서 약속 장소로 갔다.
- 이야기의 흐름을 부드럽게 연결하는 문장
- "Suddenly, two of them locked their arms together and asked me to hop on, as if they were making a human chair for me."
- 갑자기 친구 두 명이 팔을 엮어서 나보고 타라고 했다.
- 재미있는 상황을 설명할 때 유용한 표현
- "I felt so embarrassed that I tried to run away, but I tripped and fell."
- 너무 창피해서 도망가려 했지만 넘어지고 말았다.
- 감정을 생생하게 전달하는 표현
- "Even now, we still talk about that day, and every time we do, it brings back great memories and makes us laugh."
- 지금도 우리는 그날 이야기를 하고, 이야기할 때마다 좋은 추억이 떠올라 웃게 된다.
- 경험을 마무리할 때 자연스러운 문장
✅ 해석 (한글 번역)
"내가 살고 있는 동네에서 가장 잊을 수 없는 경험 중 하나는 내가 20살 때 있었던 일이에요. 그날 저는 제 친한 친구들과 만나기로 되어 있었는데, 아무도 제 전화를 받지 않았어요. 처음에는 너무 짜증이 났어요. 저는 약속을 당일에 취소하는 걸 정말 싫어하거든요.
그래도 화를 내지 않으려고 약속 장소로 갔어요. 그런데 도착하자마자 친구들이 미안한 표정으로 저를 향해 뛰어오는 거예요. 갑자기 두 명이 팔을 엮어서 저보고 타라고 했어요. 저는 너무 당황했어요!
그 장소는 사람이 많아서 다들 우리를 쳐다보고 있었어요. 너무 창피해서 도망가려고 했는데, 그만 넘어지고 말았어요. 친구들이 제 이름을 부르면서 저를 도우러 뛰어왔죠. 그 순간, 저는 마치 슬랩스틱 코미디의 주인공이 된 것 같았어요.
결국 화는 풀렸고, 우리는 모두 크게 웃었어요. 지금도 그날 이야기를 하면 좋은 추억이 떠올라서 항상 웃게 돼요."
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